National Poetry Month: Poetry Challenge of the Day

Flint Town Limerick

J L Carey Jr
My pockets are empty - save lint
Cause I live in the hell hole of Flint
Where the crime always climbs
While the poor work for dimes
But the strip clubs still make a mint

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Becky Whittemore6/21/2009

    Very clever limerick.

  • Walton S. Tissot4/14/2009

    cool ...... I think flint & battlecreek, should be just ripe with poetic stimuli .

  • Shaheen Darr4/8/2009

    Very funny and so true! Good one!

  • Christine Bruness4/7/2009

    Isn't that ALWAYS the case with strip-clubs? Good one. Very amusing.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI4/7/2009

    Fantastic.You please read my post on Limeraiku in Tamil i my posts.

  • J L Carey Jr4/7/2009

    Thank you guys. This was a fun poem. I had never had a go at a Limerick before. I can't wait to see the Obama-Llama poem.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA4/7/2009

    Very nicely done....Good poem !

  • Paul Rance4/7/2009

    Very good, JL! Working on an Obama limerick, and a llama should come in the rhyme somewhere.

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