NEW YEAR 2010 POEM and WISHES

Deonils
"Call and Response Poem"
I
I was but a baby on his back
He was hiking in the beloved woods with me
It would take decades for me to fully unpack
... sudden rain, dying Son, my cries, his words ... mystery

II
Now, as I cannot hide my whitening facial hair
The whispers, "I love you, my child" recur as song
As refrain, the Great Commission, the Comforter -
He brought me front then, when I howled in the storm

III
Welcome words, tone , wing-like arms warmed me then
Heartistic wisdom, fraternal vision, my own wings of joy
Now dance like the first newborn love between man and woman:
Consummation, multiplication, duplication in one more girl and boy!

IV
We have come this far through the simple complexity of Love
One who loves me - and you - more than we will ev'r guess
Who weeps to hear us weeping, wanting ... who climbed down from above -
And does yet, disguised as a parent, foe, friend, spouse: to listen and bless

V
Why shall I keep these muddy lips reticent, closed?
The true Lover walks among us yet, with lepers, harlots, thieves;
Until we respond to the wailing widows, shyest siblings, bleeding foes
In the ordinary, hurried moments, our ears hear not ... in baked sands and cities.

Published by Deonils

I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • Janet Hunt4/29/2010

    Revisiting. Hope all is well! :-)

  • Walton S. Tissot3/16/2010

    very interesting I likeit; read it twice ...maybe one more after comment (;

  • Tina Twito3/6/2010

    THis is gorgeous. I've been away too long. YOu lifted me today. I see it's been a while since you last published. Hope to see more soon!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA2/2/2010

    very nice !

  • Faith Draper1/16/2010

    Beautiful - sorry so late commenting!

  • AnnaB1/10/2010

    very pretty

  • Linda Riggs1/5/2010

    I really enjoyed this poem.

  • Angel Vee1/3/2010

    This was totally amazing, god bless you you have a perfect way of touching our hearts!

  • Robert Lee Alford1/3/2010

    Great work! loved it.

  • Shirley M.1/2/2010

    This is stunning. Happy New Year. Your sister in the Lord, Shirley Mandel

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