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  • Jenny Writer1/30/2010

    Great. :)

  • Joanne Lynch1/30/2010

    Oh...great for him! Dancing in the sun - what a great ending!

  • Ali Canary1/29/2010

    Aw, I'm glad it worked out for him :)

  • Tal Boldo1/27/2010

    Oh,wow! You took my breath away. I didn't expect so clever an ending. Like a Sufi poet, you said so much with so little. I'm so glad I found you on another AC contributor's fav's. Adding you to my favorites.

  • Cassandra Antares1/26/2010

    great imagery!

  • Jaipi Sixbear1/26/2010

    I love Limericks!

  • Bethany Marsh1/26/2010

    Another wonderful creature, so fun!

  • Langley Cornwell1/25/2010

    Love this. That line - Till one day he danced in the Sun - is fantastic.

  • Christopher James Patton1/25/2010

    Thanks for the recent comment and add- you're on my favs as well. When I read this limerick it made me think of dancing with myself, and I just may! =-)

  • J L Carey Jr1/25/2010

    &)

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