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Tina Twito
Sudden rush of wings--
we cannot hold the moment
with nets full of holes.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Orchiolum2/26/2011

    Even nets of solid steel would not hold the moments...except within our chemical electric memories. Nicely done.

  • Sherri Thornhill8/26/2010

    Makes me think of basketball:)

  • Grace Anne Carey8/18/2010

    I like it :)

  • Shana Dines8/14/2010

    Beautiful and in so few words. Great imaginary.

  • Sherri Laponsie8/9/2010

    Great job ;)

  • Walton S. Tissot7/13/2010

    cool; welldone

  • J L Carey Jr7/13/2010

    Great haiku. The imagery that it invokes is wonderful.

  • Delicia Powers7/12/2010

    Your Haiku is Art!

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