Odd Magic

David Lanier
It was the pain that brought the magic,
i know it must sound queer.
It may even seem to be very tragic,
but there's no need to fear.
Then the magic brought the solitude,
solitude built the walls.
In a land where no one may intrude,
darkness never falls.
It was the magic that brought the storms,
blowing with gale force.
Flitting on the edge without form,
never felt remorse.
Loneliness brought on scathing clarity,
painful new insight.
Thoughts full of seeming disparity,
haunt my dreams at night.
Then the magic brought you to me,
i can feel it in my heart.
The loneliness and solitude i once felt,
is filled with loving light.
Through the trials and the tears,
you hold me near, and calm my fears.
Though we argue and we fight,
you still love me, and it's all right.
Now i know, now i see, the magic
made me who i am supposed to be.
So here's to you dear, and what we have.
I'll always be here until the last.

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Published by David Lanier

Born and raised in Salt Lake City, Utah. Grew up working in the family business. Worked at the Grand Canyon in'93, and fell in love with the power of nature. Spent some time in the Army. Married for a few ye...  View profile

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  • Heather Kristina Thomas6/14/2010

    "Then the magic brought the solitude,
    solitude built the walls." I had to stop and re-read this line. I just love it!

  • Donald Rothra6/14/2010

    I had to read it again. This is deep. I like it.

  • Lucky M Diaz6/14/2010

    Thanks for sharing your poem with us!

  • Shelly Barclay6/12/2010

    Great poem. I have to say I love the pic that you added.

  • Donald Rothra6/12/2010

    Great work.

  • L Capra aka Zenabowli6/12/2010

    "If you believe in magic, come along with me
    We'll dance until morning 'til there's just you and me" - John Sebastian

    Nice poem Dave... thanks

  • Nina Marshall6/12/2010

    Beautiful indeed. Interesting sequence and circle!

  • Sue Gibson6/11/2010

    Beautiful. You have to realize what you don't have in order to appreciate what you do have.

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