ODD MOTELS

Audrey Star Josefek
"Odd Motels"

This motel room reminds me
In the hours, dark & late
Of the 1970's
Paisley curtains, panel walls.

It seems to me as though
This room was never touched
left alone as a place
That time forgot to alter.

The bed is hard and springy
It's a pain, surely a sham.
I think I saw a bug
What color is that carpet?!

Motels are such odd places
Showing off different eras.
How do they get stuck like that?
Anyone else notice?

Published by Audrey Star Josefek

My name is Audrey Star J., I love writing, & hope to have a published book someday (don't we all?! ) ! I love being a Wife & Mother, my cat, being a Traditional Catholic, singing, animals, drawing, painting,...  View profile

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  • Jan Corn1/2/2010

    Yes, old motels give me a definite sense of being locked in the past, captured so well by your poem.

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