Office Haiku

4-12-2011

J L Carey Jr
Lies in the office
Spin like plates on circus poles - - -
Sunny day surprise.

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Shirley Ann4/14/2011

    I once worked in a pretty girl ugly girl newspaper office, with me being the ugly one because I was the oldest of the two reporters. So I know what an unhealthy work place where lies flourish is all about. Your poem is an apt description. Didn't last long. :-(

  • Heather Kristina Thomas4/13/2011

    This is excellent, JL!

  • Cathy A Montville4/13/2011

    Spinning plates is so appropriate a description! Perfect! :)

  • J L Carey Jr4/13/2011

    Wanted to give some props to Julie in the office for coming up with the spinning plates simile. &)

  • Walton S. Tissot4/13/2011

    :0)

  • Grace Anne Carey4/12/2011

    nice ;)

  • Patricia A. Ziegler4/12/2011

    This is really good!

  • Delicia Powers4/12/2011

    perfect imagery...!

  • Tina Twito4/12/2011

    Love the "spinning" lies. Great metaphor!

  • rama devi nina4/12/2011

    Excellent! ;)

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