Old Country Livin'

By Kassie Sexton (15)

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This is an original poetic adaptation of "Where I'm From" by George Ella Lyon. My 15 year old daught..uh, niece Kassie Sexton wrote it for a school assignment, and it ended up winning an award for Freshman Lit. She has been writing for several years now, and she is good at it. This is her first poetic offering, and she asked me to post it on AC for her. SO, it is with honor, I humbly present her masterpiece, "Old Country Livin'"

I am from picnics,
From parties, from plays,

I am from throwing eggs in the house.
(I was little, and Mom would get mad.)

I am from dandelion patches,
Like their seeds,
Tickled my nose when I blew on them.

I am from chocolate pies and dances,
From Georgia and Tennessee.

I am from stay-ups and sleep-ins,
From night-lights and tuck-ins.

I am from deep valleys,
With flowers in the meadow,
With sounds singing me to sleep.

I am from Fall Creek and Lakeshire,
Fried potatoes and scrambled eggs.

From my grandparent's pure hearts,
Overfilling with joy;
The excitement I brought them.

Under my bed are memories,
Who remind me every day about who I am.

And who fill me with emotions;
Happy, Sad, Angry, LOVE.

I am from all these moments in time;
From Icees and hugs,
To end a perfect day!

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  • Suzanne Bennett9/13/2008

    Terrific! Excellent structure, continuity, and content! It is wonderful to see a young poet who is not a slave to rhyme scheme! Her choice of words really evokes strong mental images and creates excellent thought texture! Love it! : )

  • Morton Templeton8/4/2008

    lovely poem sorry it took me so long to find it very nicely done loved the lines "I am from dandelion patches, Like their seeds, Tickled my nose when I blew on them."

  • J. Clayton7/28/2008

    Wonderful read! I loved the Icee part, banana ones with Coke flavor mixed in. They never have banana and what is a blue raspberry? Wow, a budding poet and writer like her fath..uncle. ; ) -James

  • Hannah7/24/2008

    Absolutely wonderful! You made me want to go there!

  • Randy Inman7/22/2008

    Very nice work young lady.

  • Amanda Pampena7/2/2008

    Kassie, you have such great talent!! This line in particular stands out to me: (I was little, and Mom would get mad.) I LOVE THAT!!!! Wonderful poem!

  • Monique Finley6/25/2008

    Rock on Kassie! Mike I understand why you claim her! Keep it up you two!

  • Irene Lynn6/23/2008

    Excellent job!!!

  • Mary Naylor6/22/2008

    I enjoyed this poem! I especially loved the fresh, down-to-earth- imagery.

  • K. Jai Estes6/17/2008

    Very talented! A++

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