On Fire

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Tina Twito

Sweet tragedy of
shooting stars:
to blaze new pathways
through the night,
one must first
burn away.

Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Grace Anne Carey9/23/2011

    This is beautiful

  • Philip Theibert9/20/2011

    Great imagery

  • Philip Theibert9/20/2011

    Great imagery

  • Trisha Hodges9/18/2011

    Kinda sad, but good choice of words.

  • J L Carey Jr9/17/2011

    A star always burns brightest just before it goes out... you are on fire too, lets hope you burn as long as a star does as well. &)

  • Tina Twito9/16/2011

    Thank you both! Thanks for the re-post Mindy!

  • Mike Oberg9/16/2011

    Good analogy!

  • Mindy Mai9/16/2011

    BTW, I'm tweeting this one with the description "Sweet tragedy of
    shooting stars." This poem is super!

  • Mindy Mai9/16/2011

    Love this analogy.

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