On the Ledge

C. Love

Standing on the ledge

Pondering

Devoid plausible options

Unable to continue fighting

Hopeless

Knocked down, yet again

No longer in control

Helpless

Drifting in the current

Abandon on every side

Alone

Support system nonexistent

Unsure of where to turn

Lost

Desiring direction

Coveting deliverance from burdens

Freedom

From overwhelming heaviness

Shattered into vanquished pieces

Longing

To be made whole

Searching for reasons to stay

Contemplating

...leaving the ledge

Published by C. Love

"If I have the gift of prophecy, and understand all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith, so that I could remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing."  View profile

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  • Pure Writing11/8/2008

    I HEAR YOU, THIS IS HOW I FEEL VERY OFTEN IN MY LIFE.PEACE.LONG TIME NO COMMENTS.PEACE.

  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable10/29/2008

    Another moving piece of writing from one of AC's most talented poets!

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper10/20/2008

    Very sad :) Sheri

  • Meki g10/20/2008

    Very well written-been there.

  • A.M. Morgan10/20/2008

    Well written. Thanks for providing insight as to what a person feels like on the edge. Happy to hear this is not written from the perspective of how you are feeling right now.

  • C-Love10/19/2008

    Very well said, Joy. No, I am not on the ledge or anywhere near it. I was thinking about how those that are must feel and what could drive someone to such a point. I know in spite of how bleak it may appear at times, God will never leave me or forsake me nor allow more on me than I can bear. ;o)

  • 3lilangels10/19/2008

    ;-);-)

  • John Mario10/18/2008

    Oops. I should have said the Suicide Hotline.

  • John Mario10/18/2008

    Depressing. Well written. Mental Health Hotline could help.

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