One of Many Idiots

Anony mouse
the circular motion above our heads
is casting an unlikely shadow
in what is to be the future of the world.

We sat and thought about it last night,
but every time we think,
and sit
and dream
and be,
somehow,
the element of surprise is never brought up as a possibility.

Is it just me,
or the fact that we don't plan for this
leaves us vulnerable for the attack?

we sat around.
thought along the dotted lines
projected in the star-filled sky
daydreaming of the dream
of the collective subconscious,
feeling around the area for hope
but only finding dandelions.

It's been a while since we just sat,
looked up to the sky
and embraced the very rain that plagues us.
it remains with us, you know.
we're like flowers and programmed robots.

We think. we look, we act.
and sometimes,
as the stars perfectly align,
we can make sense of the obvious
collect the abstract
and execute the art of reaction.

we sat there,
dumb,
with pupils dilated,
hair freely flowing,
mouths wide open,
like little kids,
for the second time ever in our lives,
just letting our mouths catch the rain
collecting puddles near our molars, incisors, and what not
collecting puddles directly channeled to our brain,
collecting thoughts of years past
as kids
sitting alone
drinking rain water
and being sick the next day.

I blinked.
you fluttered.
we spoke in tongues
we watched the sun surface in the sky
trying to rush the rain away,
but defiant, the rain stayed.
but this time,
we were not sick the next day.

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  • BLACK ANAL MASTER8/28/2007

    It was confessional, yet dishonest.

    The narrator pretends to be horrified by the sexuality that she in fact fetishizes. She subsumes herself to the myth of black male potency, but then doesn't follow through. She thinks she "respects Afro-Americans," she thinks they're "cool," "exotic," what a notch he'd make in her belt, but, of course, it all comes down to Mandingo cliché, and he calls her on it. In classic racist tradition she demonizes, then runs for cover. But then, how could she behave otherwise? She's just a spoiled suburban girl with a Benneton rainbow complex. It's just my opinion, and what do I know... but I think it's a callow piece of writing.

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