One Predawn in Spring
the handful of fallen blossoms
color reminiscent of seatide eyes
scent of memories against my lips
i allow myself this moment to feel Emotion
for the one who knows my greatest fear
though i may hide from
the most glorious smile (slightly askew)
i am not concealed from the one
who lurks behind the shattered mirror
and i wonder
if the slow and soft memories
of arms flung around me
drawing me near as i made to leave
are enough to halt the ensuing ice floe
color reminiscent of seatide eyes
scent of memories against my lips
i allow myself this moment to feel Emotion
for the one who knows my greatest fear
though i may hide from
the most glorious smile (slightly askew)
i am not concealed from the one
who lurks behind the shattered mirror
and i wonder
if the slow and soft memories
of arms flung around me
drawing me near as i made to leave
are enough to halt the ensuing ice floe
Published by Jolynne M Hudnell
Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in... View profile
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8 Comments
Post a CommentHad to come back and read it again. Very nice work.
Beautiful piece as always
Stirs the heart of loneliness.
super
I wonder a similar thing.
Such poetic nature in this that assuages the humanity in us all. I can sense that there is a struggle but one that you are not succumbing to totally my friend. God bless and thank you for writing this. Such elegance yet pain co-exist together.
Nice job.
Beautiful.... :o)