Original Poem: Less Than You

Sherri Thornhill

I'm not less than you

If I don't dress like you

Fake impress like you

Upgrade my address like you.

I'm not less than you

Feel need to confess like you

Hide the mess like you

Think I'm blessed like you.

I'm not less than you

If my wallet won't stress like you

Don't gotta have the best like you

Build my nest like you.

I'm not less than you

Won't say yes like you

Judge the rest like you

Hypocrite at its crest like you.

Written by Sherri Thornhill (July 25, 2011)

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*Check the supporting links on this article for more poems I have written*

Published by Sherri Thornhill

I am a retired Police Officer and a professional freelance writer. I enjoy writing about a variety of topics. In addition to Yahoo Voices, I write for Examiner.com as the National Generation X Examiner, the...  View profile

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  • R.C. Johnson10/21/2011

    Back for a second read. I hope to be able to read more of your poetry in the future and will watch for any new postings!! rcj

  • Darren Koobs7/30/2011

    Very good Sherri. I love how your style and rhythm, it goes so well with your powerful verses.

  • Sandy James7/30/2011

    You get the point across quite well!

  • Sherri Thornhill7/27/2011

    Thanks for the kind comments everyone!

  • Jimmy Collins7/27/2011

    Great Sherri!

  • John Myers7/27/2011

    You said it buddy!

  • Han Van Meegerin7/27/2011

    I like you just the way you are.

  • LetsCook7/26/2011

    Great poem Sherri!

  • Bob Langham7/26/2011

    Very good Sherri! Geat poem.

  • R.C. Johnson7/26/2011

    No, you are not! You put many types of feelings into words and expressed yourself well through this original poem. Well done! rcj

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