Our Greatest Downfall

Coffee Mugg

I sit in the eye of the needle,
Watching the world pass me by.
I am hiding from good and evil,
Please don't ask me why.

It lurks all around us,
Waiting to strike.
It is said to be ruthless,
Like the freshwater pike.

Swift and agile
As it moves along
Coy as a damsel,
But yet so strong.

Where oh where,
Do I go from here?
What is my fate,
It's not clear?

Some say they have risen,
To continue their fight.
The earth, their prison,
It doesn't seem right.

But such is life,
As we know it down here,
It cuts like a knife,
Used as a spear.

Someday the truth,
Be known to all,
So uncouth,
Our greatest downfall.

So remove yourself,
From that eye of the needle,
Protect thyself,
But be not vengeful.

Published by Coffee Mugg

I am a 60 year old male, born and raised in Alabama. Have been in construction most of adult life, and had lived in Orlando Fl for over 30 years. Have now come back to Alabama. Could be considered an expert...  View profile

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  • Nancie Norton3/27/2008

    Wow, this one really is good!!...such an unlikely place to think of... but it makes perfect sense!!!! What an original idea Ken.... ~ PEACE ~

  • mimpi3/26/2008

    so profound!

  • Harriet3/25/2008

    I'll think of you Ken the next time I sew in that button on my shirt.

  • Rosa Hayes3/25/2008

    This was really great!!!!!!!

  • Pearlygates3/25/2008

    Such a creative poet!!!! Great job!!!

  • Lisa Renee.3/25/2008

    Very good writing, Mr. Ken!

  • 3lilangels3/25/2008

    This was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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