Pain

Louisa Burgess
Pain comes in different types
comes at you at different speeds
comes during the day or night

Pain makes you cringe
makes you cry or shout
makes you cranky and sometimes afraid

Pain feels different yet the same
feels sharp or dull and
reminds you that you're alive

Pain can be deep down or superficial
it can keep you awake
it can tug at your heart

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • LarrWayne Po4/7/2011

    Pain can be an annoying teacher.

  • Genie Walker2/19/2011

    Unfortunately I am an expert on pain - this is right on target.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI5/7/2010

    Pain shared makes pain halved.Pain expressed relieves us from its perpetration.

  • Sondra C4/22/2010

    Very well written.

  • Tony Jingo3/17/2010

    well said!

  • Angel Vee3/16/2010

    Well said here!

  • Linda StCyr3/13/2010

    very well said!

  • Nancy Tracy3/12/2010

    Well said! Pain is... well, a pain.

  • Sondra C3/12/2010

    I just returned to AC from a medical problem. The pain was horrible and your article is right on track. Well written .

  • Janet Trieschman3/12/2010

    unfortunately, you are right on target

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