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  • Nancy P. Goodman, in Tennessee4/5/2011

    good work! I checked out several of your Health articles, but no place to comment! Good work on those, too!

  • Rita Oakleaf4/2/2011

    Good poem. Sorry I haven't commented in awhile. It stinks that H & W articles still don't allow comments when you write so many. I came over to comment on your spider story on my article. Ewwww! Haha That sounded awful! Now I have a new fear: hundreds of spiders hatching in my shower. Yikes.

  • Jeanne Baney3/31/2011

    Very nicely done. I love a good haiku

  • Robert O. Adair3/12/2011

    Very evocative!

  • Mike Powers3/11/2011

    A beautifully expressive work of poetry. Thanks!

  • Delicia Powers3/11/2011

    Very powerful Haiku, well done!

  • Thomas Lane3/11/2011

    For some reason, this brought to mind Bobby Darin's wonderful song, Paper Roses

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky3/11/2011

    Been there. Get that!

  • Abby Greenhill3/11/2011

    oh my

  • Memmay Moore3/10/2011

    Ouch!

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