Path of Life

Saying Goodbye

Stormy Rayne
All my love
All my trust
Shattered vows
This life unjust.

Through good and bad
I promised you
You said the same
It wasn't true.

The winds of change
Blew through our lives
And left behind
Our lonely cries.

As we looked ahead
The hill was steep
We didn't climb
But stopped to weep.

Two roads diverged
And we couldn't decide
So we chose our paths
And said goodbye.

Published by Stormy Rayne

I write in order to say all the things in life that I can't say out loud. At times it is much easier to explain emotions in written form than verbal. Writing has been my release since I was about 11 and con...  View profile

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  • CJ Mathis1/21/2010

    Beautifully written.

  • R. Elizabeth C. Kitchen1/21/2010

    Nice job on this.

  • Tricia Sabol1/21/2010

    I was in a place just like this once, but, thank goodness, it didn't last forever. Beautiful piece!

  • Allana Calhoun (Tink)1/21/2010

    Very pretty and emotional!

  • Angel Vee1/21/2010

    wow real nice, hugs!

  • JerseyNana1/20/2010

    Laura, I hope you find true love, you sure deserve it! God bless and hope you heal quickly, but your poem is a classic! Love ya!

  • Michele Starkey1/20/2010

    Laura, I've felt your pain in the past, it gets sooo much better! Hang tough, cheers.

  • Silly Sally1/20/2010

    Wow this is one of your best!! Heal baby girl...

  • Catherine Spencer1/20/2010

    I hope you can heal...sounds like the pain is so bad! Be kind to yourself :)

  • Patti Walden1/20/2010

    Excellent...catharsis.

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