Peering Through the Veil

Candice

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the veil is thin today

a strand is loosed from the web

floating aimlessly

sparkling in the rays of the sun

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where do i start

where do i begin

where do i go from here

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without a thought

without a care to mind

without the weave to hold it close

without the rest keeping it in line

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nowhere to go from here ..but everywhere

here is no place at all, yet every place at once

and there is no there to see...no there to feel, hear, or touch

what if just here is all there is...and all there ever was

Published by Candice

I'm a theophile, a freelance writer and a regular contributor to many sites and blogs. I'm also a creative spirit and artist, aromatherapy enthusiast, alternative healing therapist, lover of angels, and musi...  View profile

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  • kimberly brueland6/28/2011

    very deep thank you

  • LarrWayne Po5/20/2011

    Good poem.

  • Nancy P. Goodman, in Tennessee5/7/2011

    back to visit today!

  • Sherri Granato5/6/2011

    Creative. I like the line "nowhere to go from here, but everywhere".

  • Cindy Lynn5/6/2011

    Well done, Candice ... I liked this so much that I came back and read it again. :) Excellent poem!

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan5/1/2011

    Like the soul imprisoned by the body, now set free! Evocative - siva

  • Robert O. Adair4/30/2011

    Well written! Evocative!

  • Jack Wellman4/28/2011

    What great skill you have Candice. This is exceptional.

  • NANCY CZERWINSKI4/28/2011

    Candice, I love it! 5*

  • NANCY CZERWINSKI4/28/2011

    Candice, I love it! 5*

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