Please Do Not Cry, If I Am No More

Deepak
Please do not cry, If I am no more

because I won't be there to see your tears;

Please do not call me,

I won't be there to listen to your voice;

Please do not be sad,

because I won't be there to feel your sadness;

Please do not put flowers on my grave,

because I won't be there to feel their fragrance;

Please do not lit any candle on my grave;

because I won't be there to see the light;

Please do not write my obituary,

because I won't be there to read it;

Please do not get my photo published in 'Memory'

column of a Newspaper,

because I won't be there to see it;

Just pray to God, if I am nor more

So that my soul could rest in peace!

Please do not cry, If I am no more

because I won't be there to see your tears.

Published by Deepak

I love to write articles/poems on topics of general interest. I prefer sharing my experiences of life with others. I like to share knowledge with others. I love to interact with others and love to read artic...  View profile

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  • mayka9/16/2008

    Reading this has brought tears in my eyes. The poem is excellent.

  • ciades4/15/2008

    im so touch! i like this one....

  • Deepak2/27/2008

    Dear 3Lilangeis. Thanks for your observations on my poem and for your kind words and motivation.

  • 3lilangels2/27/2008

    very sad but great job writting this. you are very talented here.

  • Deepak2/19/2008

    Thanks very much. When you say - literally your eyes were full, it means I succeeded in my expressions.

  • mimpi2/19/2008

    I am not be much of a poet but I have my facts straight. More than writing anything I could feel the profound feeling that this actually renders. Deepak, this is so wonderful that I literally have my eyes full. Keep up the good work going. We all want you to go places. And I know, you will always be there to care for us and to make us smile and happy. That's so very Deepak!

  • Apsara2/17/2008

    Deepak , now what made you write such a sad poem. I have seen deepak who is always optimist and encourages people like me who have lack of confidence and negative feelings. But today you look a different person......anyway there are always moods that effect a persons writing.
    I take it just as a simple writing and appreicate it and I think it is excellent.

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