POEM: You Bored?

Pure Writing
I saw your latest picture.

That had no future.

It was you.

You looked like a bored fool.

You must be happy.

You must spend your Friday nights.

All alone at night.

That sure is a fright.

I wonder where you are.

Your heart must be empty like a glass jar.

I know you don't feel like a star.

I know you are thinking of me right now.

Wow!

I just remember.

To just forget her.

FIN

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  • C-Love5/5/2008

    Nice work showing the honesty of desiring those that inflicted pain receive it back in greater measure.

  • Pure Writing4/22/2008

    Thanks guys for the love, and support, it's trully appreciated.laterz.

  • Louisa3644/21/2008

    Good job! lovely.

  • Bla bla Bla4/17/2008

    This is pretty awful.

  • 3lilangels3/28/2008

    Lovely job and a touch of sweet and sadness, great!!!!

  • Lisa Renee.3/27/2008

    Lovely and bittersweet ...good job on this.

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