Poem: Gaps

H. Kris Thomas
H. Kris Thomas, Yahoo! Contributor Network
Jan 4, 2010 "Share your voice on Yahoo! websites. Start Here."
All of those gaps.
I can feel the gaps, but
I cannot see them-
Those pesky holes.

I fill them with endless tasks
In hopes that they will occupy my troubled mind;
Hoping to convince my troubles to
Quit troubling me.

Published by H. Kris Thomas

So Cal resident writing poetry and other things...but mostly poetry.  View profile

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  • Gary Davis3/19/2010

    You have a wonderful talent and this is a beautiful observation. My wife has observed some of my gaps and claims they are in my thinking. :) Thanks for a nice thought.

  • Anthony Ventre2/6/2010

    so are y'all stressin' out there in the OC?...:)... nice rhyme....

  • TS Garp1/20/2010

    Fill in the gaps. A never ending thing that keeps us busy. :)

  • Charles Johnson1/20/2010

    great job! hugz cj

  • Faith Draper1/16/2010

    Great job - feel like your talking about me :(

  • Marc Schenker1/9/2010

    I'm guessing different people interpret poems like this in their own, respective, ways.

  • J L Carey Jr1/8/2010

    I like this poem a lot. I can relate to this.

  • george chavez1/8/2010

    Very nice. I guess gaps can be helpful when you need to keep your mind busy by filling them!

  • Mallory Collier1/6/2010

    Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing. :)

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