Poem : "Origin of a Poem"
some jumbled up words
took wings and flew
out of my heart.
Sailing through the azure sky,
stroking the waves of the
Jade waters of the ocean,
they rose like the
mist from the valley.
Slowly they drifted
to kiss the mountain brow
and glided leisurely earthward
to play with the gurgling brook.
Intoxicated by the scent
of my wild flowers dreams
fragrant with the smell of
first rain showers
they settled on a piece of paper
in my hand.
Interlacing themselves
with the rhythm of life
weaving the yarn
with colors of joy
they brought into existence
my first poesy of the day.
Published by Tikuli Dogra
Welcome to my page.Writing is a passion for me and also an opportunity to connect with people around the globe. A keen observer of life,I am curious,adventurous and ready to learn something new every day to... View profile
- The 12 Songs of Christmas: Surprising Secrets of the Season's Most Popular TunesLots of holiday songs are festive, many have spiritual overtones, and all are played often. But what do you know about how these songs were created and the people who wrote them? There are some fascinating facts behin...
- Origin of Christmas CustomsChristmas customs have been observed from generation to generation. Where did some of the most popular ones come from?
- Origins and Etymologies of U.S. State NamesThe origin of some U.S. state names are more obvious than others, though, more than half come from tribal languages, with several still a mystery to scholars; here's all 50 state name origins alphabetically.
Did the Greek-Trojan War of Homer Really Happen?Whether the war actually occurred or is the flights of Greek poets' fantasies is not entirely clear.- An Examination of Darwin's Literary Impacts and AccomplishmentsDarwin's "The Origin of Species" had a huge impact on the world of literature, one which is often overshadowed by his scientific achievements.
- Origin of Valentine's Day
- The Origin of a Survivor
- Creationism: The Origin of Life Debate
- The Origin of Christmas
- The Origin of Halloween
- The Origin of the Lullaby "Rock-a-bye Baby"
- Concept of Satire in Poems
10 Comments
Post a Commentnice, it made me think a lot and i felt really refreshed! Thanks!
Beautiful. I remember watching a television show about a poet. He lived in a small village. He never attended school.. so he couldn't read or write.. yet he was able to verbalize the most beautiful poems. It came without any effort on his part... truly gifted.
It really feels good to see readers do the critique of my work .thank you friends
You always create such beautiful pictures with words, Tiku! I'm always so happy to read your writings.
Intoxicated by the scent
of my wild flowers dreams
fragrant with the smell of
first rain showers
they settled on a piece of paper
in my hand.
Well done. I would suggest perhaps a comma after wildflowers, so the reader does not think it you are speaking of the wildflowers dreams and not your own.
best,
Don
Yes, .. a feeling, a thought, some jumbled up words,
interlacing themselves with the rhythm of life..!!
how well said Tiks.. thanks for sharing ur words, thoughts & feelings.. :)
Simply Superb.
Simple words yet such profound expression the scenario is as vivid as in a vision, I can only wish and pray oh dear Poetess,
May there be more power to your creation.
May you be blessed with infinite wisdom and a lot of creative energy.
God Bless you and your creativity
Your work is always do vibrant. I feel I "see" your poems.
very beautifully expressed!
Very nice Tikuli.