Poem: Pain in My Life

Pure Writing
Pain in my life.

Is normal.

Everybody has pain.

Just like all people have fate.

Some people feel like hurting their body.

But, pain should be treated with friends.

That way there is a good trend of life.

Stay calm.

Fold your palm.

Relax, and enjoy the real world.

Because, it will not fold.

This place is good to live at.

But, make sure you realize that.

Remember to just think positive.

Instead of thinking without a trend.

FIN

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  • A.M. Morgan10/7/2007

    Great poem. We all have problems that we are going through it is important to remain positive throughout it all. A better day always comes. Thanks for sharing.

  • SweetReviewer10/6/2007

    wow really deep and insightful!

  • Pure Writing10/4/2007

    Thanks "Irene L.", I will think positive, but what worries me is all the problems people face everyday, but I guess I will work only on my problems, and try not to worry about other people's problems.thanks.laterz.

  • Irene L10/3/2007

    Nice Poem and so true..think positive!

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