POEM: I Promised Not to Call You

Pure Writing
I promised not to call you.

But, I called you anywayz.

You acted like I wasn't in a maze.

And, I think you claimed to need space.

That figures, thats why you spend all your time on myspace.

Which, can be at stake.

You acted like everthing was fine.

I just wish you have someone to dine.

You ignored me to the fullest.

Like it was a contest.

But, I do have a confess.

To make.

But, it does not involve cake.

I care.

But, your life is going to tear.

I'm me.

And, in the past it was we.

FIN

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  • Pure Writing3/19/2008

    Thank, Thank you 3lilangels, I really appreciate the support.laterz.

  • 3lilangels3/19/2008

    very good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Pure Writing3/14/2008

    Thanks, SweetReviewer, good day.laterz.

  • SweetReviewer3/14/2008

    poem was really good to read!

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