Poem: Sober

Pure Writing
I been sober for two months now.

I feel really good.

And, proud to be still in school.

Beer was my best friend at one time.

It sure tasted really fine.

I held you, and you tasted fresh.

And, I like how you gave me respect.

But, it was all an illusion.

All that time I was in confusion.

Until I met you.

You are my new beer.

I can hold, you my dear.

It's been two months now.

Wow, it feels like a year.

But, I will resist.

And, focus on you.

You will be my new drug.

Because, I like the way you give me hugs.

FIN

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  • Bla Bla Bla4/17/2008

    Damn! If you are writin' this bad sober, maybe ya should down a couple!

  • Alfonso Coley11/30/2007

    You have an unusual style of writing, your poem is somewhat a short story-well..,-all poems are short descriptive stories. Keep on writing, you will have some great work in due time.

  • cathiesbloggs11/23/2007

    Great poem!

  • Pure Writing11/15/2007

    Thanks Mike and Bridgitte, i really appreciate your comments.laterz.

  • Mike Sutherland11/15/2007

    Stay clean, keep writing; nice poem!

  • Bridgitte Williams11/13/2007

    Cool. Enjoyed. :-)

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