I been sober for two months now.
I feel really good.
And, proud to be still in school.
Beer was my best friend at one time.
It sure tasted really fine.
I held you, and you tasted fresh.
And, I like how you gave me respect.
But, it was all an illusion.
All that time I was in confusion.
Until I met you.
You are my new beer.
I can hold, you my dear.
It's been two months now.
Wow, it feels like a year.
But, I will resist.
And, focus on you.
You will be my new drug.
Because, I like the way you give me hugs.
FIN
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6 Comments
Post a CommentDamn! If you are writin' this bad sober, maybe ya should down a couple!
You have an unusual style of writing, your poem is somewhat a short story-well..,-all poems are short descriptive stories. Keep on writing, you will have some great work in due time.
Great poem!
Thanks Mike and Bridgitte, i really appreciate your comments.laterz.
Stay clean, keep writing; nice poem!
Cool. Enjoyed. :-)