POEM: Your Soul is Cold as Ice

Pure Writing
Your soul is cold as ice.

That can't fly as high as a kite.

You never melt.

Or, maybe felt.

Your life is cold.

From what I been told.

You never sleep at night.

Or, have the might.

To express your frozen heart.

To have know you were only a joke.

I can fly as far as peace.

But, your soul is nothing, but a trick.

FIN

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  • SweetReviewer5/29/2008

    hey i enjoyed reading this poem :)

  • Pure Writing5/9/2008

    thank for the support guys, this is a true event, and people in this world can be real cruel. but the good thing is that these people are hurting with guilt inside.peace out.

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock5/8/2008

    This is so sad and I have felt this! Keep staying strong and this was a very good poem!

  • cathiesbloggs5/8/2008

    WOW !!!!

  • 3lilangels5/8/2008

    Great poem, !!!!!

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