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  • William Henry Mills JR3/15/2012

    Wow! Intense!

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan11/30/2011

    A fact of life that we all have to go through, the pains and the joys of life, one after another - siva

  • Shirley A Mandel10/4/2011

    A lovely expression of regret. Unfortunately, we all have them.

  • Carole Anne Somerville4/14/2011

    Very sad :)

  • RANDY SHARPE4/1/2011

    Deep as usual. Thank you

  • Mike Powers3/28/2011

    Beautifully eloquent, deeply expressive, and wonderfully poetic. Glad to see you writing here again, and hope to read much more from you. Thanks!

  • Deb Martin-Webster3/28/2011

    Welcome back Heather, so good to see you writing again. Well written and emotional poem!

  • Delicia Powers3/28/2011

    Memories pain is as sharp as any sword, outstanding work as always Heather, glad to "see" you again...:0)

  • rama devi nina3/27/2011

    emotionally charged and well penned poem, Heather. Nice to see you posting! ;-)

  • Adam Michael Luebke3/27/2011

    Very thoughtful poem, Heather. Reading the last three lines makes me need to read again the first few lines, and suddenly I'm caught rereading the poem several times. I really like that second stanza; a vast world of people plagued with inevitable loneliness seems to be tucked between those words. And yet, there's something playful (and daring) with the repeated words 'goodbye' and 'wicked'. Maybe 'playful' is the wrong word, but the repetition draws attention to the poem itself, which I think adeptly balances the poem's emotional aspect. Anyway, enough non-expert analysis from me -- great poem.

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