Poem with a Twist: A Shakespearean Sonnet About Writing a Sonnet

Sweet Rhyme, Whose Veiled Meaning Brings Content

Cindy Lynn
You're probably familiar with a few lines from a Shakespearean sonnet, but have you ever tried to write one? A sonnet follows specific rules. There can only be 14 lines and each one needs to be written in iambic pentameter, having ten syllables each. The alternating verses of the sonnet must rhyme as well, in an a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g pattern. Note that the last two must rhyme with each other.

Associated Content sponsored a contest for contributors, with a $100 prize to the winning sonnet. Undoubtedly, most speak of love, but a sonnet that tells of writing a sonnet? Not so many. Here, for your enjoyment, is a sonnet with a twist.

Sweet Rhyme, Whose Veiled Meaning Brings Content
Though some might ask-with jeers-this very day,
Why didst I crave a task with such a bent
And take upon my shoulders to display
Sweet Rhyme, whose veiled meaning brings content?
Bright coins of gold-'tis true-for which I yenned
Thus, struggled long with pen and shadowed ink
Creating lines with syllables of ten
While hoping selfsame meter didst not stink.
I pray thee, Lords, to find it smooth as glass
And judge this Rhyme with fourteen lines in all.
'Tis hope I have it will not give thee gas,
Nor cause the hairs upon thy heads to fall.
Yet, I must say-in truth-this brought great fun,
And should I lose, it seems I still have won.

Other verse by the author:
A Rhyming Love Poem About Faeries and Modern Love
Short Poem About Pansies, in Rhyme
Short Rhyming Poem About the Ocean and God's Love

Sources:
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Associated Content assignment details.
Personal experience.

Published by Cindy Lynn - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle

A freelance author with numerous published stories/online articles, Cindy loves food, and enjoys collecting and trying new recipes. She also enjoys gardening--both vegetables and flowers (she completed cours...  View profile

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  • Cindy Lynn5/18/2011

    S. Constance: Thanks for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed the sonnet! :)

  • S. Constance Farris5/17/2011

    Love it. That was awesome. It made me laugh out loud.

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Cathy: Thanks for commenting. I'm a bard at heart, huh? Never thought of that before! :)

  • Cathy A Montville4/21/2011

    Your are a bard at heart, Cindy! This was truly a fun sonnet! :)

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Hi Dan: Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Since humor seldom wins at AC, I doubt I stand much of a chance. However, I think you have pretty good odds in your favor.

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Allana: Well, sometimes it's hard to tell what instructions really mean. If you're like me, I always figure them out AFTER I've published. Good luck to you, too.

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Hi Lee: Glad you enjoyed it, especially since it's not a love sonnet!

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Hi Sherri: Thank for the good luck wishes. :)

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Pinkali: Thanks for your kind thoughts and for stopping by.

  • Cindy Lynn4/21/2011

    Hi Davida: Thanks for your comments. That's something to consider, whether or not I should have used "yen" instead of "yenned." Too bad AC contributors can't post for a critique before publishing ... I believe I might have seriously thought about going with your suggestion. :)

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