POEM: I Walk Through LIfe

Pure Writing
As I walk through life.

Trying to erase her site.

Off my mind.

But, she was not so kind.

I walk everday.

With no faith.

Or, maybe a picture.

Is all I got for memories.

She just stepped on me.

I walk through life.

Thinking of you.

Or, just thinking of your games.

You played on me.

It's kind of funny.

How you don't know I'm writing about you.

For sure.

I will keep on walking.

Lost, and without no joking.

FIN

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  • Bridgitte Williams5/5/2008

    There is a reason for all and that is true. Learning and growing are the fruits of our hardships. :-) Keep your head up and keep walking.
    :-)

  • A.M. Morgan5/1/2008

    Good job. As I read your poem I thought of the song with the hook. "I bet you think this song is about you."

  • Louisa3644/11/2008

    awesome poem!

  • Catdog4/2/2008

    Wow take the s out of she and he works for me! Great poem that I can truly relate to.

  • Pure Writing3/30/2008

    Thank you guys for the support, I really try, I'll check out ya work soon.laterz.

  • Lisa Renee.3/30/2008

    Wonderful poem...great job!

  • 3lilangels3/30/2008

    5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!

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