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  • Christine Bruness3/11/2010

    Came back to this one yet again as I never tire of reading it. Posted it with a great many other pieces of yours today on Live Journal.

  • Langley Cornwell1/27/2010

    So true. Out little guy is not aloof at all.

  • Christine Bruness4/4/2009

    I returned to this piece again tonight...so emotional and touching, Paul.

  • Tiadorah Anderson3/15/2009

    I call one of my cats " the healer". The other one is so in tuned to my emotions. They are the greatest.

  • Pikie3/14/2009

    My 3 cat's are motorboats, too!

  • Danielle "L"3/13/2009

    I Love the motorboat comparison to a purring cat-really nice!

  • Christine Bruness3/9/2009

    This is tender and touching. I really appreciate the use of just four lines, too.

  • Orchiolum3/8/2009

    The reading reminded me of Kiki who passed away this past October...spunky, beautiful and gray...eyes of green or turquoise, depending upon the light.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA3/8/2009

    very cute poem, very nice :)

  • Susan Elliott3/7/2009

    Interesting Poem, kind of a contemporary Haiku.

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