Poetic Forms: Haiku and Senryu

Jack Huber

Haiku is one of the oldest Japanese forms of poetry. Originally written about the seasons of the year, currently nature is also an acceptable theme.

Haiku does not rhyme and consists of 17 syllables in three lines in a 5-7-5 format (five syllables in line one, seven in line two, then five again). In classic haiku, there is usually a "cutting word" that turns the thoughts of the reader in an unexpected, sometimes ironic, direction.

Although "haiku" has become a catch phrase that includes any and all 5-7-5-formatted poems, there are other forms with that format. Senryu can be thought of as haiku that features human foibles or characteristics of life rather than nature or the seasons.

Since they are short, titles of haiku or senryu often are taken from the poem's first line or are simply numbered, though naming poems is completely up to the author without specific rules.

Examples:

Spring Harvest (Haiku)

Spring harvest begins
when revealed petals call out
for tiny visits.

Intensity (Senryu)

Loud explosions fuel
the thrill of intensity
in a stuntman's heart.

Published by Jack Huber

Jack's background includes several years of business development and over 25 years in the computer industry. He is currently a Systems Analyst at Wichita's Mid-Continent Airport. Jack is a published poet...  View profile

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  • Teresa Mahieu9/14/2009

    I like these forms of poetry. Your explanations of haiku and senryu are easy to understand. Thanks.

  • addie protivnak (boatst)9/14/2009

    Interesting . I'm not a poet but I may try this. Thanks

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