Poetry: Grief

Jenny Heart
Grief is the emotion right

beside the newcoming spirit.

A heart once filled with grief

can never see relief,

until the two ends meet.

Love verses hate,

allowing both emotions

to feel each tender,

yet frail thoughts.

For without allowing grief,

to feel what it must,

Grief can't be erased and reborn to trust

Published by Jenny Heart

I write on ehow, Triond, Bukisa, Xomba, and Infobarrel. When belonging to all these sites one can't help but learn many things. Sit a spell and learn something new. I might just be writing about you.  View profile

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  • Heather Kristina Thomas12/26/2010

    Beautifully penned!

  • April Higney8/12/2010

    So beautifully poignant. I love the flow of these words. Many of us may share different views perhaps in light of what we believe in...myself a more spiritual view but also share a connection in understanding pain, and pulling in the better (lit) emotions. Sometimes it can be difficult to deal in grief/loss/pain but it does however help us to see the better more clearly. Lovely words

  • Sandy James8/2/2010

    Ohhh, very nice.

  • Lois Lunsford8/2/2010

    You get it right. Good poem.

  • Nora8/2/2010

    Great poem.

  • Freida Thomas8/1/2010

    Great poem Jenny!

  • Marie Stine8/1/2010

    Well done, you can't move on until you go through the cycle of grief.

  • Bridget Ilene Delaney7/31/2010

    At the end of July, I was able to slack a little bit, but come August, I must really knuckle down (http://bit.ly/bbUxTI) and get down to brass tacks (looks like one I need to do!) when it comes to writing - as always, still reading, but quick comments!

  • Dan Reveal7/31/2010

    Great, Jenny!!

  • Dina Quirion7/31/2010

    Excellent... :o)

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