Poetry While Sleeping

Good Reason to Keep a Notebook by the Bed

Louisa Burgess
Last night I wrote a poem

while half sleeping in my bed

I struggle now to remember

and come up blank instead.

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Pretty thoughts that were profound

came tumbling through my head

perfect verse lovely while sleeping

now lay dormant and dead.

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I recited it over and over again

this poem that moved me in my head

tossing, turning, attempting wakefulness

get paper, get pen, I thought I said.

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • Jon Creffield12/7/2008

    It's strange what fleeting thoughts pass through our heads while we rest. Dreams and half-dreams, all easily forgotten

  • Christine Bruness11/28/2008

    Whoa, I know this situation well! Excellent piece!

  • Solo Maverick11/26/2008

    This is interesting~

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper11/26/2008

    You're strong, haven't convinced myself to do it :) Sheri

  • 3lilangels11/25/2008

    I can relate to this forsure great poem!

  • Darin Tripoli11/25/2008

    i love it d:)

  • Momma J11/24/2008

    Lovely verse. Happens to me all the time, sometimes when I am awake.

  • Sofya Blinder11/24/2008

    I think we have all been through this. Thanks for sharing :)

  • Kofi Bofah11/24/2008

    I keep a notebook next to me - and always scribble in it late at night.

  • Nikki11/24/2008

    i can relate to this!

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