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  • Harry Gunawan1/15/2008

    I agree with Kady. The last line really punch! Or I say, smite! :-D....Overall, great haiku!!! :-)

  • Frank Jones1/9/2008

    good poem

  • Kady Burney12/26/2007

    WOW!!!!! "Smite the darkness!!!!!" WOW!!!!!!! Can I say it again now???? WOWOWOW!!!! great use of words here and what a GREAT poem!!!!! 5 outta 5!!!!

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