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  • Lady Entropy10/21/2008

    I like it! The rhythm and internal rhymes make sweet delivery of your very on point message.

  • Lana Clifton10/15/2008

    I like it. If I choose not to vote for him it will NOT be due to race, but the issues. I wish others would make the same choice. Excellent use of meter.

  • Nancy Tracy10/7/2008

    This was great : ). Perfect meter and clever concept!

  • Geannie M. Bastian10/6/2008

    This just has awesome rhythm! Good luck, you deserve it!

  • Theresa10/6/2008

    Cute! Good luck!

  • Smorg10/4/2008

    ....for some reason this goes really well when hummed to the tune of 'O soave fanciulla'... especially if ya' use Barack Obama rather than just the lastname for the first phrase. ;o)

  • Nikki10/3/2008

    :D

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