Spurting tall through sky
Eyeing down with fake conceit
I'm not belittled.
Eyeing down with fake conceit
I'm not belittled.
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Mou D
11March 2008
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(I owe this poem to Brigdet Delaney who has appreciated all my work without going overboard. I am especially thankful to her for pointing out the 'should haves and should not have beens' with equal fervor. )
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22 Comments
Post a CommentNice doodle!
short and sweet, nice.... :o)
You've managed to say a lot through just a few words. It's an inspiration for me as I am trying my hand at poetry.
done a wonderful job on this. Beautiful picture. thanks.
btw...this comment should've shown up in three lines...itself a haiku
very nice haiku
pride of lofty ones exposed
humble wisdom shown
Wow, really love this. Great job.
The palm tree is a brilliant metaphor for pride. I have seen palms toppled by a strong wind, and the roots are not deep, despite their height. This is a most telling image for pride, I think. This haiku is brilliant in its simplicity. Excellent economy!
gosh..this is so wonderful!...you're very talented!
Simply beautiful!