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  • mimpi6/22/2009

    The effect has left me speechless JL. Quagmire is beautiful!

  • Nataly Tamayo6/11/2009

    This left me wanting to read more, great piece!

  • Christine Bruness6/8/2009

    Fascinating.

  • Walton S. Tissot6/4/2009

    ;)

  • Paul Rance6/3/2009

    Intriguing, JL. Your work always makes me think... More mundane matters... Received no notification - again!

  • Shirley Mandel6/2/2009

    I like the little play on words in the first line. Clever.

  • Ana Maria Alvarez6/1/2009

    The first line really just caught me, esp with the title being quagmire. A beautiful beginning. I'd like to read more.

  • Tikuli Dogra6/1/2009

    vivid ... I would love to read the rest of the poems .. thanks for sharing

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