Relationship Ditty

( to the Tune of Rock-a-bye Baby )

Whyte Panther
Rocky relations

Dampen the eye

Too many nights

You lay there and cry

When the vow breaks

The marriage will fall

You wonder how it

Even started at all

Published by Whyte Panther

Whyte Panther -- Born and most likely conceived under the Verrazzano Bridge in Brooklyn, NY (god how my mom LOVES it when I tell that part). I am now living in the south east corner of Arizona in Geronimo's...  View profile

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  • Justin Vaughn6/14/2010

    I hope everything works out

  • Bridgitte Williams6/12/2010

    Well said and well written. :-)

  • Mildred Windham6/8/2010

    good write, no pain, like a broken heart.

  • Maria Fairbrother6/7/2010

    Clever work!

  • Sue Gibson6/6/2010

    Now that's cute, but when it gets to this point--maybe it was never meant to be in the first place. Thanks, Panther.

  • Jim Ross6/5/2010

    The enigma is as great when it ends as when it begins, Whyte Panther, with emotional debris scattered far and wide. Good job.

  • Michele Starkey6/5/2010

    Ouch, and they couldn't put Humpty Dumpty back together again! cheers ;)

  • Donald Rothra6/5/2010

    Cute :)

  • Linda Louise Johnson6/5/2010

    That's cute.

  • April Higney6/5/2010

    Done well...sad, but with somehow a theme of comforting in the lullaby notion! Good writing Whyte.

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