Revolving Door

J L Carey Jr
J L Carey Jr, Yahoo! Contributor Network
Aug 6, 2009 "Share your voice on Yahoo! websites. Start Here."
This is the same.
This is the same - old
This is the same old place -
Again.
The same old place -
This is the same.
This -
This place,
Again.
It's all too familiar.
It's all -
So,
Familiar.
This is the same.
I know -
I know I've been,
Here before.
I've been,
Here -
Before.
This is the same.

Published by J L Carey Jr

J L Carey Jr, Author of the book Turning Pages, is a writer and an artist living in Michigan with his wife and three children. He holds an MFA in Creative Writing from National University and a BA in Englis...  View profile

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  • Christine Bruness2/24/2010

    I know the feeling.... the repetition gives it a solid rhythm here. Very well done.

  • Paul Rance2/16/2010

    Deja vu!

  • Naomi Kent9/5/2009

    Nice work (great title too)!

  • Sherri Laponsie8/18/2009

    Love this peice, great job!

  • Shirley Mandel8/15/2009

    Clever poem! Deja Vu. :-)

  • Walton S. Tissot8/9/2009

    :) Happens to me all the time; over & over. GreAt Work!

  • Shaheen Darr8/7/2009

    good one, would be great as a song too :)

  • Paul Rance8/7/2009

    Deja vu! Feel like this watching the eternal rain here. Like three years of continual Autumn!

  • Tina Twito8/6/2009

    I know the feeling. And I love your tecqnique here, rhythmically disjointed.

  • Ana Maria Alvarez8/6/2009

    Nice beat!

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