Inhale the heavens--
and feel me move.
Can't subdue the crying eyes,
for they're everywhere drowning everything.
Exhale the ground--
and feel me move.
Can't subdue the voices,
for they're everywhere piercing everything.
A scent of rose is in the air,
wonder on what wind it drifted from--
if you dare!
Numbness sets in if you stand here to long,
try--tell me--am I wrong?
Just breathe--ignore it,
you'll still feel it,
for deep with-in you know,
you made a creative sin.
There is no containing the pressure,
your soul will scream for more,
and lock your spirit inside a revolving door.
Feel me move higher--
no longer will I only love and cry here,
knowing all but the world can hear.
You shall now too,
no wall nor shield, to hide,
just the slow beating echo of you.
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5 Comments
Post a CommentGreat images, well written.
i can chillingly relate. very well done.
Very interesting! :-)Bravo!
This is a very thought-provoking poem. Great job!
very nice. Far deeper than most of my poems. I am scared to be this open with my emotions.