Revolving Door

Poem

Jessy Blue
Revolving Door:

Inhale the heavens--

and feel me move.

Can't subdue the crying eyes,

for they're everywhere drowning everything.

Exhale the ground--

and feel me move.

Can't subdue the voices,

for they're everywhere piercing everything.

A scent of rose is in the air,

wonder on what wind it drifted from--

if you dare!

Numbness sets in if you stand here to long,

try--tell me--am I wrong?

Just breathe--ignore it,

you'll still feel it,

for deep with-in you know,

you made a creative sin.

There is no containing the pressure,

your soul will scream for more,

and lock your spirit inside a revolving door.

Feel me move higher--

no longer will I only love and cry here,

knowing all but the world can hear.

You shall now too,

no wall nor shield, to hide,

just the slow beating echo of you.

Published by Jessy Blue

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  • Shanelle Diaz8/18/2007

    Great images, well written.

  • Fateplayer38/17/2007

    i can chillingly relate. very well done.

  • Bridgitte Williams8/16/2007

    Very interesting! :-)Bravo!

  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable8/16/2007

    This is a very thought-provoking poem. Great job!

  • jeremy riley8/16/2007

    very nice. Far deeper than most of my poems. I am scared to be this open with my emotions.

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