before he walked out the back door.
He'd threatened
this was coming,
but she never knew for sure.
Strangely,
the tears never fell from her eyes.
The world didn't seem colder,
even with this last good-bye.
Now she's waiting at the train station,
wondering what lies a head
Life, love and honesty
a gentle touch, a warm bed?
Life always turns
but in the blink of an eye
dreams wash away
with a glance, with a sigh.
With her man gone, she opens the door
on a long forgotten past
running wild, running free,
and running fast.
Chasing down rainbows,
she rides their rays.
Living fully each moment,
embracing each day.
Once, he returned
like he had before
stood outside, hollow,
pounding the door.
His knock, never answered.
He stood there alone.
She had finally found herself,
and it wasn't at home.
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Published by Susan Elliott
Susan Elliott's poetry has appeared in both print and online formats. Susan has recently published her first two Kindle books: Wandering Through a Barely Functional Mind and Ink Blots on Paper. View profile
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3 Comments
Post a CommentI loved this poem! It makes a great point and touched my heart!
Great poem! Would make an awesome song!
have you set this to music yet?