Rise, Rise Sleepy Sun

James Davis,
Rise, Rise sleepy sun
my petals need your light
my seeds are slightly sprouting
sun down on me early morning bright.

My roots are stronger
from the mid solemn rain
mother nature is calling
drip drop rain falls into my vein.

I'm planted and watered
I'm unique and seen alot
I'm known to be special
have you guessed me yet ?
on valentines I'm bought

In the garden, I'll grasp your eye
I'm not fully bloomed just yet
but my petals are growing quick
rise rise sleepy sun before I weep and die

Published by James Davis,

I'm starting art school in august for fashion design to start my own apparel eventually and I'd do whatever I can to work for that money to make my dreams come true. I've been writing for years I found this...  View profile

  • Looking in with your imagination of the sun and rain raising up a garden of plants
  • Look in detail and envision a plant to a kid growing up and how it relates.
Every flower has it's unique trait just like a human that when you study you will be stunningly surprised what you learn.

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  • Grace Anne Carey4/26/2010

    you captured some nice personification throughout this piece...keep writing!! :)

  • Softdiamond4/2/2010

    I love nature poems.Nature poems can possess thousands of imaginary things, purely beautiful imaginary things..:)

  • Mike Oberg4/1/2010

    Nice imagery!

  • leroy coffie3/26/2010

    more good poetry. like your stuff dude

  • Soleil Robins3/25/2010

    Simply sweet! :)

  • Alexiandria M Michaels3/24/2010

    This is really beautiful. Look foward to reading you! :) Thanks for stopping by my page!

  • Tony Payne3/24/2010

    That's beautifully written.

  • Ron McQuade3/23/2010

    Bittersweet ending. I liked it!

  • Lee Davis3/23/2010

    James: +++++++ Lee

  • Susan Elliott3/23/2010

    Really like these two lines "mother nature is calling
    drip drop rain falls into my vein." Love the photo with the poem as well. Beautiful!

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