Roller Coaster Love (Limerick)

Don Rothra

Relationships can be forlorning,
When love turns to hate the next morning.
With wine, dine and dance,
They talk of romance,
And suddenly it turns into scorning.


By Don Rothra

Published by Don Rothra

Published poet and a retired professional musician but mostly jack of all trades. Several years experience in construction. Song writer and country band leader for many years  View profile

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  • Kitty Stevens7/4/2011

    I think this is great work. Relationships work best when based on more than that fleeting thing that, yes passes all too soon.
    ;)

  • pamela7/4/2011

    Sad but true! LOL!

  • Sherri Granato7/4/2011

    Ouch! It happens to the best of us. Happy 4th of July Donald.

  • Effi L. Donovan7/3/2011

    You really have a talent with limericks. Happy Independence Day!

  • Jeanne Baney7/3/2011

    Human nature rears it's head! Good one!

  • Mary Oberg7/2/2011

    Fun one!

  • Lori Gunn7/2/2011

    excellent writing :)

  • JerseyNana7/2/2011

    It can happen! Good one, Don!

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan7/2/2011

    Harsh realities of life that we cannot avoid at times - siva

  • Darren Koobs7/2/2011

    It's true. And it's also why I've never pursued one night stands.

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