Rules

Carmella Mae Dunkin
What are rules, and why do we need them?

What are rules, and why should we heed them?

Sometimes rules are just really stupid,

like, don't click the ad, or else you'll loose it!

Some rules are good, like don't smoke cigs,

they pollute your lungs, and makes you sick.

Rules they sometimes interfere,

with the very existance we have here!

Rules what are they exactly, and why do we bother?

seem such waste, when we could just have Faith in the Father!

2008 Carmella Dunkin

Published by Carmella Mae Dunkin

Carmella Mae Dunkin is a photographer, writer, singer, artist, web designer, wife & mother of 8. Carmella loves singing, photographing everything she see s, writing, (including plays and skits), designin...  View profile

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  • 3lilangels3/7/2008

    wow this is truely amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Layla Lair3/5/2008

    What a beautiful poem.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.3/4/2008

    What a beautifully written poem! Great job!

  • Donna Porter2/24/2008

    Lovely...and great illustration!

  • Michael K. Miller2/24/2008

    Amen, indeed, Carmella Mae! "For I know the plans I have for you..." (Jeremiah 29:11-13) In praise, Michael

  • Kim Linton2/20/2008

    This is fantastic!

  • Missy H.2/15/2008

    Thats a great poem :)

  • Lenora Murdock2/15/2008

    Beautiful poem!

  • Rebecca Livermore2/15/2008

    Another great poem!

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