SANIBEL

Freedom Dream

Orchiolum

SANIBEL

I dreamed of a place where sinners were free,
where believers resembled the dead.
I dreamed of a time when all Gods were entombed
and we believed in each other instead.

I dreamed of a place beyond their dark star,
beside the Sanibel Sea,
where believers and all their Gods were entombed,
where my brothers and I walked free.

Published by Orchiolum

Progressive, tree hugging, Earth loving free thinker. When I see the Royals I am reminded of a world in need.   View profile

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  • Magena Fawn 9/9/2010

    I felt it!!!

  • memmay151 4/28/2008

    You rock...gentle and gorgeous..There is a beautiful Sanibel Island here in Fla.

  • RM Gal 4/19/2008

    Beautiful dream.

  • Robbrian 2/14/2008

    Clarity and flow but only a few know.
    Amongst them you reign and so sane.
    To hold within those precious dreams.
    Reality can be more than it seems.


  • Robbrian 2/14/2008

    Clarity and flow but only a few know
    Amongst them you reign and so sane
    To hold within those precious dreams
    Reality can be more than it seems


  • Beth Inman 2/8/2008

    Very, very nice. It rolls off your tongue like a song!

  • Monique Finley 1/26/2008

    I really enjoyed this poem. Can I join you in this dream?

  • Harry Gunawan 1/15/2008

    Very thought provoking. Solid poem indeed!

  • Orchiolum 12/9/2007

    Jack, I will, and please do.

  • Jack Oceano 12/5/2007

    I love it. If you ever find this place, be sure to let me know. And I promise to do the same.

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