[Bill is standing on the sidewalk smoking. It's a few years earlier but he looks a few pounds fatter and has more receding hair. He's leaning against the fence to the house next to his apartment building.]
[Joey runs out. He's a kind of scrawny and hyper guy.]
Joey: Biilllyyyy!!
[Cut to Billy walking into his apartment. The building looks like nobody lives there and inside, even though there are four to five people in there, something about it seems empty. The space presents the aura of an abandoned warehouse.]
[Billy walks into his room and lays down.]
[Billy wakes up. He smokes heroin. He goes into the shower very very slowly and sluggishly. It takes him two minutes to rise from the bed and quite a long time to get to the door. When he's in the shower he's dozing off while he's high. He hallucinates that a vampire mauls him in the shower and that helps him keep his eyes open while he's too wasted to go on.]
[Billy comes out after cleaning up himself. Joey is there with Kaye, the kind of girl you'd take home to mother. She's in her mid-20's and a college student.]
Joey: Hey man. A vampire get you?! Haha!
Joey: See! Look at that!
[He points to Billy's neck where a couple of places that he cut himself shaving are. There's two dripping holes that look like vampire teeth marks. They all laugh about it. Joey gets the camera and takes pictures.]
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13 Comments
Post a CommentGood to hear from you again :-). Good rough draft on the screenplay, I can't wait to see it develop.
Nice script!
it was awrite pal was getting so excited like !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
excellent script! thanks for sharing
Good job on this screenplay!
Thanks everybody.
Thats unfortunate, since I was starting to get scared. I love horror stories.
Back from working vacation, happy Easter
Interesting.
Glad to see you back writing, very powerful, is it a play?...you are thinking of publishing, you have the talent...the strength of your writing lies in your on heartfelt feelings! Love to read the whole book...