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A Sunday Haiku..

mimpi
Two bodies far flung

Thousands of miles conspiring

To split their lone soul

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Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.   View profile

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  • P V Ariel 12/9/2009

    Its really wonderful mimpi. Thanks

  • Walton S. Tissot 10/13/2009

    well done. Great tone.

  • Alok 10/12/2009

    It's amazing what a few words can convey. The beauty of it lies in the various thoughts and imagination brought about in the mind of the reader, actually trying to feel through the emotions. Superb haiku Mimpi.

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky 10/9/2009

    Amazing!

  • Dan Reveal 10/8/2009

    This is just so interesting I wanted to come back to it again!

  • Heather Carreiro 10/7/2009

    This reminds me why I love haikus. : )

  • Sheryl Young 10/6/2009

    Altho' I'm not really good at interpreting haikus, this sounds like an ill-fated love story.

  • Dan Reveal 10/6/2009

    I really enjoy this intriguing haiku!

  • J L Carey Jr 10/5/2009

    This is really good mimpi. It certainly has a Sunday feel to it.

  • J P Whickson 10/4/2009

    Compelling

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