Self Portrait

Poem Based on an Image

Jolynne M Hudnell
deciding
purpose
here and now
the past may shape
but i re-form it
cannot control
if i refuse
tired of getting by
gonna spread my wings
and fly
be who i am
and meant to be
in the wind that leads
though never too far
to return
for a vivid memory
more recent
plays in my mind
as i made to leave
arms flung around
drawing me near
that moved me
nearly to tears
as i felt Emotion
-- and as that
with mordant wings
attempts to pace me
to engulf with his
false lessons
of nevermore
i laugh as
he was proven wrong
once
and may be again
as i recall the
shattered box
and the broken shard
i keep as a reminder

Published by Jolynne M Hudnell

Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in...  View profile

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  • Maria Malone9/7/2011

    Love this, "gonna spread my wings
    and fly
    be who i am
    and meant to be" So Well Done!

  • Lee Hansen9/4/2011

    Powerfully written and said.

  • Freida Thomas9/2/2011

    Intriguing, great job!

  • Dina Montgomery9/1/2011

    Great work (((hugs))) :o)

  • Laura Cone8/31/2011

    way to go

  • Han Van Meegerin8/31/2011

    Great words and and great art work.

  • Jack Wellman8/31/2011

    An excellent work of art, and I mean not just the picture or self-portrait, but the works on the words. There is a mixture of pain and suffering and a realization of self that shows life in extraordinary and complex patterns. What a talent you are my friend. I can see your heart in this work of art. God bless you friend.

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