Separation from Within

A.M. Morgan
United we stood for an extraordinary cause

But somewhere in the middle we fell short

In the beginning the vision was very clear

Now ulterior motives have been revealed

The facades began to fade away

So the truth was no longer concealed

We turned into I and the teamwork effort began to die

We could no longer look in each other eyes

The thing that mattered most was holding on to one's pride

The focus was lost although we kept hope alive

But the writing was on the wall as we took a devastating fall

Together we could no longer win

Because we failed to escape

Our biggest struggle

The separation from within

Published by A.M. Morgan

A.M. Morgan is a New Orleans native who enjoys creative writing and the performing arts.  View profile

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  • Cathy A Montville9/15/2008

    It truly does take "teamwork." Lovely....

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper9/2/2008

    Very sad, well done :) Sheri

  • Arkay Evans8/29/2008

    VERY nice. I love how you wind up to the close of this truth.

  • Elena H.8/21/2008

    Very perceptive view of what happens in many relationships.

  • 3lilangels8/12/2008

    Very beautifully done!!!!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA8/11/2008

    Very nice job here :)

  • Tammy White8/11/2008

    Nice job:)

  • RANDY SHARPE8/11/2008

    Another great piece. nice work here!

  • GUIENT8/11/2008

    Great poem. I have been where this poem takes you. I only hope that I can never visit that place again. My mind tells me that what I hope for may never come to be.

  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable8/11/2008

    Another thought-provoking poem with a powerful message!

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