Shifting Sand

Jillian McCoy
Rocks that turn to sand

and sand that turns to glass

changing shapes that rise and fall

shifting landscapes of time

does anything ever really disappear?

Lost within the shifting sand

how will we rebuild?

A land of castles surrounded

by water we can't drink.

Packed into shape by

chubby fingered children

destroyed with the stomp of a foot.

Published by Jillian McCoy

I'm a freelance writer and college student based in Philadelphia. Though I'll write just about anything as a "pen for hire," I specialize in short-form content written for the web. Some of my favorite subj...  View profile

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  • Pammila Allen4/12/2010

    PA Thanks

  • R.C. Johnson4/11/2010

    Excellent poem. :)! rcj

  • Devon Miller4/11/2010

    Love this!

  • Darren Koobs4/11/2010

    I love this kind of poetry. On the surface, it's really cute. Read it again, and deeper meaning insinuates itself...that's what poetry is supposed to be like. I loved it!

  • Jillian McCoy4/10/2010

    Wow, I haven't heard "Black" in years. I guess all ideas are born somewhere. :P

  • J.C. Grant4/10/2010

    When I read "Shifting Sand," I kept thinking: "It reminds me of something," but I couldn't place it. I'm still not sure, but I think it might be the verse of Pearl Jams' "Black." Well, I guess the whole song is a verse, but specifically, the lyrics: "untouched sheets of clay"; "broken glass"; and "kids at play." Good poem; good song.

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